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Mr. Gonzalez's 7th Grade Class

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By Jodie Spartz

 

        Mr. Gonzalez gave an end of the year creative writing assignment to his 7th grade class. Each student was to come up with their own story and put it in book form. Turn's out he has a bunch of creative minds in his class. I took the time out to read a few. In some the hand writing was so small I had to pass, my eyes were not picking up what I was seeing. The few I did read were really fun. 

Here are some of my reviews

CAPTAIN BUCKET HEAD  favorite line was: We were tied up in the back of the carriage. There weren't any couches (sadly) so my rear was learning the worst qualities of a wooden board! This story took me on a wild ride in an imaginary world, great job!

The great Pollution, Recycler & Smoke clearer (P.R.A.S.C) This story had a fun opening and knowing that the author is 12yrs old tickled me. That first line said: Frank Wright, a well built man in his mid fourties... This story took me on a corporate journey about a machine that was built, that was not supposed to be built, that was built anyway and toppled a whole government! OutStanding 

Clues of Revenge This story had a great moral about people changing their mindsets and how it's often due to a life changing situation. It also left me with some questions for the author LoL. 4 Stars Great Job!

The Journey of Wealth I enjoyed the hustle of the two main characters and them staying true to what they had to do to make their dreams come true. This was a very well put together fun read. The opening sentence of this one had me laughing too because the story takes place in 1997. This creative author wasn't even born yet LOL.

Mikes Missions: Sneaky Situation This story had an absolutely fantastic moral! Simple & plain Honesty is better than deception.

 Mr. Gonzalez thank you so much for sharing your class with me. These babies are 12 years old, sharp and very impressive. I especially liked the back of the book where they put their reviews. Pure laughter poured out of me when someone wrote: The #1 Series on Amazon!       -Jeff Bezos Or the one that wrote  "I could not put it down!" -Thomas Edison 




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